Editorial critique, context and correction

The original article said something. We add what it left out.

Addendum is a publication for thoughtful disagreement. We examine business writing, challenge weak assumptions, surface missing context and extend arguments that deserve a second look.

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Responding to MIT Sloan Management Review

AI Search Visibility Is Not the Same as Customer Choice

Brands can become easier for models to retrieve without becoming more desirable, and a recommendation delivered without a visit may be impossible to connect to a real decision.

Responding to Marketing Dive

Brands Cannot Control a Black Box by Adding More Guardrails

AI advertising platforms promise automation while withholding mechanics, leaving marketers to supervise systems whose objectives, attribution, and data flows they cannot independently inspect.

How Addendum works

Critique should add something, not merely object.

Every piece should make the reader better informed than the original article alone. Disagreement is useful only when it introduces evidence, context, reasoning or a more complete frame.

  1. 01

    Start with the source

    Explain what the original article actually argues before criticizing it.

  2. 02

    Challenge something specific

    Focus on a claim, assumption, omission, framing choice or limitation that can be examined clearly.

  3. 03

    Leave the reader with more

    An Addendum should extend understanding, not simply score points against another writer.

Why “Addendum”?

An addendum does not erase the original. It sits beside it and makes the record more complete.

We are interested in arguments that are almost right, incomplete in revealing ways, persuasive for the wrong reasons, or simply missing a perspective worth preserving.